Hi guys, when you read my recount I would like you to notice that I have put in time words, punctuation and descriptive language in this writing! We are learning to use time words and make sure our punctuation is a good standard.
Hi guys I hope you like this piece of writing that I have worked on for along time! We are learning to use compound and complex sentences. In this piece of writing you will read about a man that is a failure but believes in himself.